This is my edited version of my logo for my carts/music festival. The colours fade from pink to green, and are chosen as they have a natural look to them. The problem with this logo is that the black outline has a lot of white dots in it, which if I was going to change the logo, I would adjust this part first. Another thing I would do to improve this, is change one of the looped edges near the ‘r’ in the word ‘summer’. This is because it is not filled with colour like the other parts of the design.